Lev-Al Prose

Evidence

Ten synthetic examples

Every passage below is synthetic: written for this page, not taken from a customer. Each revision was written by hand to illustrate a mode. The protected details, the meaning checks and the result are calculated on this page by the same checking code Workspace uses. No score is published and no comparison with another product is made.

Example 1 · Synthetic

Thesis paragraph with citations and hedges

Original

It is important to note that the reforms may have contributed to lower attendance (Haddad, 2016). Furthermore, later surveys suggest that the effect was uneven across regions (Moreau & Tan, 2019).

Mode: Faithful31 words in · 24 words outPreserved

Revision

The reforms may have contributed to lower attendance (Haddad, 2016). Later surveys suggest that the effect was uneven across regions (Moreau & Tan, 2019).

Changes

It is important to note that theThe reforms may have contributed to lower attendance (Haddad, 2016). Furthermore, laterLater surveys suggest that the effect was uneven across regions (Moreau & Tan, 2019).

Protected details

  • Citation: (Haddad, 2016) — Preserved
  • Citation: (Moreau & Tan, 2019) — Preserved

Example 2 · Synthetic

Policy note with caveats

Original

The ministry should consider extending the pilot to 6 districts. However, the evidence is limited, and the costs could rise if staffing is not secured in advance.

Mode: Faithful27 words in · 26 words outPreserved

Revision

The ministry should consider extending the pilot to 6 districts. The evidence is limited, however, and costs could rise if staffing is not secured in advance.

Changes

The ministry should consider extending the pilot to 6 districts. However, theThe evidence is limited, andhowever, theand costs could rise if staffing is not secured in advance.

Protected details

No high-confidence details detected.

Example 3 · Synthetic

First-person passage

Original

I grew up translating letters for my grandmother. In doing so, I learned that a single word can change how a family understands the news it receives.

Mode: Faithful27 words in · 26 words outPreserved

Revision

I grew up translating letters for my grandmother. Doing so taught me that a single word can change how a family understands the news it receives.

Changes

I grew up translating letters for my grandmother. In doingDoing so,so Itaught learnedme that a single word can change how a family understands the news it receives.

Protected details

No high-confidence details detected.

Example 4 · Synthetic

Opinion paragraph

Original

Cities do not need more parking. They need buses that arrive on time, and I think residents would use them if the service were reliable.

Mode: Faithful25 words in · 25 words outPreserved

Revision

Cities do not need more parking. They need buses that arrive on time, and I think residents would ride them if the service were reliable.

Changes

Cities do not need more parking. They need buses that arrive on time, and I think residents would useride them if the service were reliable.

Protected details

No high-confidence details detected.

Example 5 · Synthetic

Already-good prose, minimal change

Original

The bridge reopened in May. Traffic returned within a week, and local shops reported steadier trade.

Mode: Faithful16 words in · 16 words outPreserved

Revision

The bridge reopened in May. Traffic returned within a week, and local shops reported steadier trade.

Changes

The bridge reopened in May. Traffic returned within a week, and local shops reported steadier trade.

Protected details

No high-confidence details detected.

No substantive edit was needed, so the revision is unchanged.

Example 6 · Synthetic

Figures and dates

Original

Between 2014 and 2020, the fund disbursed $3.1 million to 214 projects. Roughly 18% of those projects were located in rural areas.

Mode: Faithful22 words in · 19 words outPreserved

Revision

Between 2014 and 2020, the fund disbursed $3.1 million to 214 projects, roughly 18% of them in rural areas.

Changes

Between 2014 and 2020, the fund disbursed $3.1 million to 214 projects.projects, Roughlyroughly 18% of those projects were locatedthem in rural areas.

Protected details

  • Date range: 2014 and 2020 — Preserved
  • Monetary amount: $3.1 million — Preserved
  • Number: 214 — Preserved
  • Percentage: 18% — Preserved

Example 7 · Synthetic

Passage with a quotation

Original

At the hearing, the inspector described the facility as "adequate but overstretched" and asked for a follow-up visit.

Mode: Faithful18 words in · 18 words outPreserved

Revision

The inspector described the facility as "adequate but overstretched" at the hearing and asked for a follow-up visit.

Changes

At the hearing, theThe inspector described the facility as "adequate but overstretched" at the hearing and asked for a follow-up visit.

Protected details

  • Direct quotation: "adequate but overstretched" — Preserved

Example 8 · Synthetic

Workplace note

Original

Hi all, just a quick note to let you know that the review meeting has been moved to Thursday at 10:00. Please do not bring printed copies.

Mode: Faithful27 words in · 17 words outPreserved

Revision

Hi all, the review meeting has moved to Thursday at 10:00. Please do not bring printed copies.

Changes

Hi all, just a quick note to let you know that the review meeting has been moved to Thursday at 10:00. Please do not bring printed copies.

Protected details

No high-confidence details detected.

Example 9 · Synthetic

One source in Faithful, Exact Length and Tighten

Original

In order to improve response times, the clinic introduced an online booking system in 2021, and early figures indicate that average waits fell by 9%.

Mode: Faithful25 words in · 21 words outPreserved

Revision

To improve response times, the clinic introduced online booking in 2021, and early figures indicate that average waits fell by 9%.

Changes

In order toTo improve response times, the clinic introduced an online booking system in 2021, and early figures indicate that average waits fell by 9%.

Protected details

  • Date or year: 2021 — Preserved
  • Percentage: 9% — Preserved
Mode: Exact Length25 words in · 25 words outPreserved

Revision

Seeking to improve response times, the clinic introduced an online booking system during 2021, and the early figures indicate that average waits fell by 9%.

Changes

In orderSeeking to improve response times, the clinic introduced an online booking system induring 2021, and the early figures indicate that average waits fell by 9%.

Protected details

  • Date or year: 2021 — Preserved
  • Percentage: 9% — Preserved

Length check: exact target met

Mode: Tighten25 words in · 19 words outPreserved

Revision

To cut response times, the clinic introduced online booking in 2021; early figures indicate average waits fell by 9%.

Changes

In order toTo improvecut response times, the clinic introduced an online booking system in 2021, and2021; early figures indicate that average waits fell by 9%.

Protected details

  • Date or year: 2021 — Preserved
  • Percentage: 9% — Preserved

Length check: shorter than the original

Example 10 · Synthetic

Honest failure: not certified

Original

The pilot did not reduce costs in 2022, although officials said savings may appear later.

Mode: Faithful15 words in · 13 words outFailed — not certified

Revision

The pilot reduced costs in 2023, and officials said savings will appear later.

Changes

The pilot did not reducereduced costs in 2022,2023, althoughand officials said savings maywill appear later.

Protected details

  • Date or year: 2022 — Failed
  • Unsupported additions or removed claims: The figure 2023 appears in the revision but not in the source.
  • Negation and conditional language: A negation in the source is missing here, which can reverse the claim.
  • Meaning and central claim: "2022" from this claim is missing or changed in the revision.

This revision drops the word "not", changes the year and turns "may" into "will". The checks below flag the missing negation and the changed year as Failed, so the revision was not certified and no Fidelity Passport could be issued for it.